Tuesday, June 22, 2010

A Surprise Kidnapping.

She felt like she had been asleep for days now, as she groggily awoke with a massive headache. When she finally took into consideration where she was she was jolted forward on her hands. "Owwww" she softly groaned, but then she paused. Landing on my hands like that didn't hurt as much as i thought it was going to. She thought as she looked down and saw that both of them were heavily bandaged. She continued to stare at them till some loud yelling outside snapped her out of her trance. With a quick assessment of her surroundings she came to the realization that she was in the back of a van and the jolting she had felt was the vehicle coming to an abrupt stop.

"You worthless piece of nothing!! You were supposed to wait there and make sure she fell to her death! That wasn't even that much to ask and you failed again!" Yelled a deep, husky voice from somewhere outside the van. "I said I was sorry okay?! I thought that she was for sure gonna fall! That was pure luck she managed to survive that! Sorry.. Wont happen again." Yelled the voice belonging to the other man, but this voice sounded oddly familiar, She had to stop and think.. "It better not happen again or i'll put you through what you put her through except i'll make sure you DONT get out alive!" The voice growled as the second man yelped with fear. Suddenly it hit her, the man that yelped was the same man who pushed her off the cliff. With a surge of anger she crawled on her knees to the doors of the van in hopes of getting a better look..

It was dark outside, so she could see nothing more than the silhouettes of the two men. She continued looking, trying to figure out where she was. None of it was familiar and with a pang of fear she realized she had been kidnapped. .

(To Be Continued)

4 comments:

  1. Wow! What a cliffhangar! You have me in suspense! Please keep writing. . .I can't wait to see what happens!

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