Tuesday, June 22, 2010

The House of the Rising Sun

Erin had to stop her self from breathing to fast and to hard but the fear was overwhelming. Of course crying wouldn't get her out but she was so frightened she didn't know what else to do! She began to rack her brain for anything that would help her get out alive. .

What if i could jump put of the back! it would hurt but i rather do that then stay here, She thought. But suddenly the van came to an abrupt halt lurching her forward and then back again causing her to bang her head against the back of the car.

Then some loud talking came from outside the vehicle. . "Take her inside and put her in that one room in the basement. . can you please do this and NOT fail, I'd hate to kill you" The mans growling voice seemed to echo inside the car. "ye- y-yes sir"

Her breathing quickened as the man who tried to push her off the cliff opened the doors and stared right at her. "C- C'mon doll, we don't have all day" He stuttered, and she got the feeling he was just as frightened as she was. She started inching forward. When she was close enough to him he grabbed her arm and yanked her forward. She groaned as her knees scraped against the bottom of the van, she pulled her knees out in front of her and jumped out. The man quickly turned around as if afraid she might try to get away. Trying not to show her obvious discomfort and fear she merely glanced skeptically at him. He muttered something under his breath and as he painfully grabbed her hand, pulled her alongside him and they started inside. .

(To Be Continued)

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